Rätta Text

[Fjeddo]

Tjenare!

 

Skulle någon kunna vara schysst att rätta en text som jag nyss har skrivit? Den är alltså på engelska och det är väll inte precis min starkaste sida om man säger så. Det är för övrigt en låttext. ;)

 

Lägger in den i "code" för enkelhetens skull.

 

I would have told you if you just gave me that chanse

If you would have listen to me and not just left me here

So please tell me what I should have done

To get you to stay insted of just leaving without tell me a thing


'Cause I though that you were the one for me

But When you said you did not recognize me

Then I understood what was goin' on

You didn't want me here for more


But baby, why didn't you told me just what you want

'Cause I just want to know what I've done

Baby, why didn't you told me what you want from me 

I could have changed but you never gived me the chance


And now you want me back

Without any kind of excuse

Hah, I dont think so, I don't want you here anymore

You have yourself to blame, it's not me


But baby, why didn't you told me just what you want

'Cause I just want to know what I've done

Baby, why didn't you told me what you want from me 

I could have changed but you never gived me the chance

 

Jag suger på att skriva låttexter, men man måste ju börja någon stans. Detta var första texten jag någonsin skrev... Tacksam för svar!

[Poesi]

I would have told you if you just gave me that chance

 

If you would have listened to me and not just left me here

 

So please tell me what I should have done

 

To get you to stay instead of just leaving without telling me a thing

 

 

'Cause I thought that you were the one for me

 

But when you said you did not recognize me

 

Then I understood what was goin' on

 

You didn't want me here no more

 

 

But baby, why didn't you tell me just what you wanted

 

'Cause I just want to know what I've done

 

Baby, why didn't you tell me what you want from me

 

I could have changed but you never gave me the chance

 

 

And now you want me back

 

Without any kind of excuse

 

Hah, I dont think so, I don't want you here anymore

 

You have yourself to blame, it's not me

 

 

But baby, why didn't you tell me just what you wanted

 

'Cause I just want to know what I've done

 

Baby, why didn't you tell me what you want from me

 

I could have changed but you never gave me the chance

 

 

 

[Fjeddo]

Tackar! =)